..loved ur poem.. ..it shows hw u long fr someone..who is lost somewer... among d crowd..n u want to b back wid dat person.. ..i can feel d pain n helplessness in d quest to find dat special someone dat u r goin thru.. ..keep writing.. :)
No one knows where life's journeys will take us. The main thing is to keep planting those footsteps on the path to whichever destination. If we don't at least try, we'll never know. I like how you open & end this poem.
That is a positive attitude towards life Portia. I'm glad you've embarked in that journey towards the unknown. It isn't easy as you learn your lessons along the way but it is all worth the risk. Take very good care of yourself. And yes, challenge the unknown fate.
Dear, it's so inspiring, direct from heart touching the heart.....:)
ReplyDelete..loved ur poem..
ReplyDelete..it shows hw u long fr someone..who is lost somewer... among d crowd..n u want to b back wid dat person..
..i can feel d pain n helplessness in d quest to find dat special someone dat u r goin thru..
..keep writing.. :)
Hello.
ReplyDeleteMy first time visiting.
No one knows where life's journeys will take us. The main thing is to keep planting those footsteps on the path to whichever destination. If we don't at least try, we'll never know.
I like how you open & end this poem.
Thanks for sharing.
The Evening Zephyr
Never give up on your dreams, they will come true. Lovely poem about looking ahead and positive love.
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ReplyDeleteThat is a positive attitude towards life Portia. I'm glad you've embarked in that journey towards the unknown. It isn't easy as you learn your lessons along the way but it is all worth the risk. Take very good care of yourself. And yes, challenge the unknown fate.
ReplyDeleteI love this :)