Portia..I love your phrase, the water trembles, it's ripples shook our reflection, wiping out their separateness...amazing how a single action can dissolve the mist of illusion and Dissolve what no longer matters...leaving you with what is important...each other...all else forgotten...love your use of the still water...and it's connection to emotion..beautifully written...Always...
Portia..I love your phrase, the water trembles, it's ripples shook our reflection, wiping out their separateness...amazing how a single action can dissolve the mist of illusion and Dissolve what no longer matters...leaving you with what is important...each other...all else forgotten...love your use of the still water...and it's connection to emotion..beautifully written...Always...
ReplyDeletejust beautiful !!
ReplyDeletevery beautifully crafted n full of feelings of love n care !!
So beautiful, water is a wonderful healing power in so many ways... I love this.
ReplyDeleteGood one again.
ReplyDeleteLovely poem with a great ending. Loved the ripples in the water making you smile part.
ReplyDeletePortia, wonderful poetry so well crafted. What a transition from aloofness to togetherness!!
ReplyDeleteit was just what i was thinking this eve, was it a telepathy?
ReplyDeleteyour poem touched my heart:)
Posh this s v beautiful. So simple yet so deep!
ReplyDeleteLovely honey!!
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Mani
Beautiful! It isn't easy to say we're sorry but there are certain things that make it easier as seeing our own reflections mirrored to us.
ReplyDeleteI love this poem :)