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12/12/2011

DISSOLUTION

9 comments :

  1. Portia..I love your phrase, the water trembles, it's ripples shook our reflection, wiping out their separateness...amazing how a single action can dissolve the mist of illusion and Dissolve what no longer matters...leaving you with what is important...each other...all else forgotten...love your use of the still water...and it's connection to emotion..beautifully written...Always...

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  2. just beautiful !!

    very beautifully crafted n full of feelings of love n care !!

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  3. So beautiful, water is a wonderful healing power in so many ways... I love this.

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  4. Lovely poem with a great ending. Loved the ripples in the water making you smile part.

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  5. Portia, wonderful poetry so well crafted. What a transition from aloofness to togetherness!!

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  6. it was just what i was thinking this eve, was it a telepathy?

    your poem touched my heart:)

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  7. Posh this s v beautiful. So simple yet so deep!

    Lovely honey!!

    Love
    Mani

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  8. Beautiful! It isn't easy to say we're sorry but there are certain things that make it easier as seeing our own reflections mirrored to us.

    I love this poem :)

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