Another mesmerizing poetry! The imagery in this one is takes me far away and yet one feels so close to oneself! I guess that is a very confusing comment but I think you may understand it : ))
I like that second line, "I felt your pleasure of having me..."
Your poem transports me that remote place where I once felt love ;)...anyhow...I could still feel it and linger on those feelings while I read your poem :)
Portia, I am happy to have discovered your blog which is just beautiful!Every word in the poem is so well coined that it appears like a true work of art! I am following your nice blog!
Another mesmerizing poetry! The imagery in this one is takes me far away and yet one feels so close to oneself! I guess that is a very confusing comment but I think you may understand it : ))
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I love your words Portia..
I like that second line, "I felt your pleasure of having me..."
ReplyDeleteYour poem transports me that remote place where I once felt love ;)...anyhow...I could still feel it and linger on those feelings while I read your poem :)
Who's your inspiration? ;)
Lovely poem filled with love, loved the ending, ' we part to be, you and me'.
ReplyDelete...very well written....so lovely...
ReplyDeleteAnother lovely romantic poem...enjoyed.
ReplyDeletePortia, I am happy to have discovered your blog which is just beautiful!Every word in the poem is so well coined that it appears like a true work of art! I am following your nice blog!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poetry baby!!
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Wow! What a beautifully love poem. Really loved it Portia.
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